The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table chart illustrates how the proportion of the population in 65 and above age range changes in 3 different countries from 1988 to 2030.
Overall, the figures for population aged 65 and older in 3 countries all follow an upward trend over the period shown. Also, the share of that in Germany is always the highest of 3 nations.
Looking at the chart in more detail, we can see that people aged 65 and over accounted for 20% of Germany’s total population in 1988, in comparison with 16% and 14% recorded in that of Canada and the UK, respectively. In the next 12 years, the share of the persons aged 65 and above in Germany slightly increased, constituting up to a quarter of this country’s total population. Meanwhile, the rate of people in the 65 and older age bracket in Canada and the UK showed a gentle growth of 5% and only 1%, correspondingly.
Over the following 30 years, the percentage of citizens in the 65 and above age group are forecast to make up 30% of Germany’s total population, the highest figure shown on the table. In the meantime, this period witnessed a rise to 26% and 20% in the proportion of those aged 65 and over in Canada and the UK, respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56279069767 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80177645879 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502325581395 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4547946563 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.625 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280036862799 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127320714052 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826421953429 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190183152814 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707951866185 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.