The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The line graph compares how many citizens in India and China in 2000, and how this figure will change over the period until the prediction of the year 2050.
In general, it is obvious that the population of all regions witnessed an upward trend over the period shown. In addition, the number of inhabitants of China will be lower than that of India in the future.
In 2000, the population in India was 1 billion, 1.25 times less than that in China. Over the next 20 years, a similar pattern was recorded in 2020 owing to the marginal growth of that population. In particular, the number of inhabitants in China with approximately 1.4 billion, compared to roughly 1.3 billion in India.
During the predicted years, starting from the year 2030, the population in both India and China will stand at roughly 1.45 billion, before changing in the next 20 years. The number of citizens in India will continue to increase in the future and will stop at 1.6 billion in 2050. The opposite will express in China because the population will have a slight decrease to 1.4 billion in 2050.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ower than that of India in the future. In 2000, the population in India was 1 bil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
in addition, in general, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68947368421 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44020456887 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0673391975 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295621552039 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127038472572 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802842578822 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186066510166 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629044756857 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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