The table below shows the percentage of cars of different age from the date of their purchase in different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the percentage of cars of different age from the date of their purchase in different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table provides information on various categorized ages from their date of buy in three different countries.

The most eye-catching figures are from Japan, Where 79% cars are younger than 3 years, only 16% of cars are 4 to 5 years old, and rest of the proportion is less than 3 percent. Just over a quarter, cars are 3 years old in New Zealand, and 32% of cars are older 4 to 5 years, then after in next group it is just increased by 2%. Also, between 9-12 years there are 9% cars and barely 2% that is 13 years and more old.

In the USA there are 39% cars younger than 3 years or less, and 4-5 years old are almost a quarter, afterwards it is fall down by 3% for 6-8 years old. Lastly, near by 35% Cars younger than 3 years or less as well as 4-5 years are also has same proportion, 24% of cars are 6 to 8 years old in Britain and rest of the categories 9-12 and 13 years and more are 2% and 3% respectively.

Overall, it seem that 95% of cars was purchased in last 5 years Japan and rest of the countries' cars are mostly older up to 8 year or less.

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Average: 6.3 (6 votes)
Essays by user Ankit Rameshbh… :

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun years is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...re are 39% cars younger than 3 years or less, and 4-5 years old are almost a quarter...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ars old are almost a quarter, afterwards it is fall down by 3% for 6-8 years old....
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...l down by 3% for 6-8 years old. Lastly, near by 35% Cars younger than 3 years or less a...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun years is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ear by 35% Cars younger than 3 years or less as well as 4-5 years are also has same ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y 35% Cars younger than 3 years or less as well as 4-5 years are also has same pro...
^^
Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...% and 3% respectively. Overall, it seem that 95% of cars was purchased in last ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...d in last 5 years Japan and rest of the countries cars are mostly older up to 8 year or l...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.07511737089 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27839364642 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516431924883 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8481218948 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130740701063 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087715351964 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099285492723 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127326870388 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115622115607 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 83.33 61.2550243902 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.98 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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