More and more people do online shopping. Why is this the situation? What is the effect of online shopping on shops and communities?
Today, with the internet so readily accessible to us, more and more people are turning to online shopping for all their needs. Cloths, shoes, electronics, groceries and even fruit and vegetables can now be purchased via the internet. This essay shall look into the reasons why people are switching to online shopping instead of traditional shopping, and discuss its effects on shops and society.
There are several advantages of shopping online, because of which people are opting for this method of shopping. The first is the ability to shop at a time that is convenient to you, not just when the shops are open. The second advantage of shopping online is that goods are often cheaper as the seller does not have the costs of running a shop and having to pay wages to salespeople, insurance and all the other running costs of a real world business. Online shopping can also be a lot more comfortable than real world shopping, as people do not have to go out in bad weather sometimes.
there are many negative effects of the trend of online shopping on people and society. The main negative of online shopping is that people have to pay shipping costs and have to wait for the items they purchased to be shipped and delivered. Another disadvantages is that they cannot feel or see the item they want to buy. A person's credit card number could be hacked and misused. Finally, societies become more aloof as people do not come out for shopping, which is an opportunity to bump into someone you know and is a chance to socialize.
To sum up, the main reasons of shopping online are convenience and cost saving, which are also the positive effects. There are many negative effects on the local shops and societies. However, despite the negatives, I believes that online shopping is here to say and prosper.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: are
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...ties. However, despite the negatives, I believes that online shopping is here to say and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, look, second, so, you know, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78095238095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49970519804 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9454206943 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481143426502 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165779428779 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110558940632 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311338864979 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645264261626 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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