The table below shows the percentage of cars of different age from the date of their purchase in different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the percentage of cars of different age from the date of their purchase in different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provides information on percentage of cars divide in five age groups right from their year of purchase of 13 years and above in four countries.

The most eye-catching figures are from Japan, Where 79 percent cars are younger than 3 years. Only 16 percent cars were of age 4-5 years and rest were less than 3. It means that 95 percent cars in Japan were bought in the last 5 years.

Little over one third of cars were bought in the recent three years in the USA and the UK and almost a Quarter of the cars were up to 3 years old in New Zealand. The next age group of 4-5 years is led by Britain with 36% cars followed by New Zealand with 32% and America with 24. The following column of 6-8 years is topped by New Zealand where a little over one-third cars were of that age followed by UK and USA with a little over one fifth.

Finally, it seems that Japanese started showing great interest in owing a car in last five years whereas ever four in five cars was younger than 8 year in remaining countries.

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Average: 9.1 (3 votes)
Essays by user Ankit Rameshbh… :

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... started showing great interest in owing a car in last five years whereas ever fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, third, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27179487179 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13243324207 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7183542767 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155776933424 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824150634959 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649054328558 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120030512067 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739004298339 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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