The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004

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The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004.

The table below depicts the percentages of employers in various sectors facing difficulty in recruiting staff for the years 2003 and 2004. Overall, it is evident that enrolling technical and managerial staff was easier than finding both skilled and unskilled workers. Moreover, the most significant issue was the difficulty in finding skilled workers.

Regarding skilled and unskilled workers, the challenge of finding skilled workers increased slightly by around 4% to 6% across all sectors, except for the commerce sector, where figures decreased from 47% to 41%. A similar pattern emerged in the change in the percentage of employers encountering difficulty in recruiting unskilled workers. The manufacturing sector saw an increase from 26% to 28%, the building sector experienced a rise from 21% to 23%, and the services sector observed an uptick from 20% to 29%. Conversely, there was a decline in the figures for the commerce sector.

Turning to technical and managerial staff, the most significant decrease occurred in the building sector, where the percentage dropped by 4% in 2004. The manufacturing and commerce sectors experienced a decrease of the same rate, at a mere 2%, which was 1% smaller than that of the services sector

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...rienced a rise from 21% to 23%, and the services sector observed an uptick from 20% to 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, moreover, regarding, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35204081633 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88558637104 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525510204082 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2991897109 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325786376119 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147867277301 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151281667162 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237377992326 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120086854223 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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