The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

The table illustrates the proportion of people for both genders by age groups in a town who cycled in 2011.

Overall, it is evident that in all the age groups, the percentage of female cyclists held the lion's share while the opposite was true for that of male cyclists. Meanwhile, for both genders, the proportion of the population between 18 and 59 was the lowest.

To begin with, just over half of all male and female children under 9 years old riding bicycle. For girls in the age of 10-17, their proportion decreased slightly to almost 40%, whereas, the percentage of boy cyclists in the same age declined by over half to less than 25%.

Moreover, the figures among both genders aged 18-39 and 40-59 were the lowest. In the former age group, only approximately 17% of female cyclist, compared to almost 10% of man cyclist. Also, in the latter age group, about 12% of females riding bicycles in comparison with exactly 8% of male cyclists.

Moving to the age of higher than 60 years old, the percentage of both woman and man cyclist had a sudden increase to reach 18.5% and just more than 13% respectively.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, whereas, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69543147208 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47493034619 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7883755305 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206654457672 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908365121677 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819056499558 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129366501359 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904021142709 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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