The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The given table illustrates the proportions of cyclists among a town’s population in 2011 in accordance to 5 different age groups.
Overall, for all surveyed age groups, the higher proportions always belong to women. In addition, bicycles were mostly risen by children who are under 9-year-old contrasting to the lowest figures for the age group of 40-59.
First of all, while 51.3% and 42.2% were the figure for females who were younger than 9 and in the 10-17 age group, the figures for men were considerably lower with 50.3% and 24.6% respectively. However, there was a slightly decrease in the proportions for both genders when surveying 18-39 and 40-59 age group and this decline demonstrated by 17.1%, 12.3% for females and 9.7%, 8.0% for males accordingly.
Furthermore, when implementing the statistic in the percentages of cyclists who were older than 60-year-old, the result showed that there were only 13.2% of male population interested in cycling in comparison to a bit higher at 18% for females.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...mong 10-17 year old girls, at about 42%.However, among boys aged 10-17, the percentage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62637362637 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33373582649 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3054577993 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300161479162 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136232393898 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110643087501 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188383085903 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104350373612 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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