The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The provided table delineates a notable contrast in the preferences of male and female members of a city sports club concerning activities, facilities, and opening hours.
Generally, females tend to be content with the club's opening hours, while males exhibit a greater inclination towards the availability of facilities.
Regarding the diversity of activities offered, female members exhibit a relatively even distribution of satisfaction across all three levels, with satisfaction rates ranging from approximately 30% to 35%. Conversely, male members display a strong endorsement for the variety of activities, with over half expressing high satisfaction.
In terms of facilities and opening hours, a substantial majority of over 60% of members express contentment with the equipment, with only a minor percentage (ranging from 10% to 14%) expressing dissatisfaction. Concerning opening hours, female members exhibit a marked preference, with 72% indicating satisfaction. This is in stark contrast to male members, where satisfaction and dissatisfaction levels are roughly equivalent, hovering around 40%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05696202532 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40415144725 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4842711427 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118233943746 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610575567053 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054517000301 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896236295371 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551436308122 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 61.2550243902 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 11.4140731707 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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