The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an building on a typical weekday.
The mention tables explain the sales made by a coffee shop in a building on a typical weekday which consist of coffee, tea, pastries, and sandwiches. The major parts are described as number of the foods and beverages. In general, it can be seen it is clear that the most sold items are coffee, tea, and pastries in the morning. But, people consume the most sandwiches in the noon.
Firstly, the biggest of the sales in the coffee shop is pastries which are sold 275 from 07.30 until 10.30. And the second highest sales in the section is 265 cups of coffee. In addition, the sandwiches spend the least among all in the morning as many as 50 portions. Between 10.30 and 2.30, the coffee shop sells 200 items of sandwiches which is bigger than the coffee. The two of lowest sales at 10.30 to 2.30 in the shop are 50 cups of tea and 95 portions of pastries. The most people buy 145 cups of coffee and 150 pastries at 2.30 until 5.30 in the shop. But, there are only 40 sandwiches and 35 glasses of tea which are sold at the time. In the evening, the customers more drink 200 cups of coffee than consume tea. Furthermore, sandwiches are more eaten than pastries by the people from 5.30 until 8.30.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the lowest'.
Suggestion: of the lowest
...hich is bigger than the coffee. The two of lowest sales at 10.30 to 2.30 in the shop are ...
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Line 2, column 774, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sandwiches are more eaten than pastries by the people from 5.30 until 8.30.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, so, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38738738739 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2317444715 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477477477477 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4493032409 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181597464757 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712996182342 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114309022341 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171090576444 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641293049716 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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