The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Sales: week of October 7-13
Mon. Tues. Wed. Thus. Fri. Sat. Sun.
Lunch $2,400 $2,450 $2,595 $2,375 $2,500 $1,950 $1,550
Dinner $3,623 $3,850 $3,445 $3,800 $4,350 $2,900 $2,450
The table gives the information that how much money a small restaurant of a downtown business district sold in week of October 7 to 13. Overall, both of lunch and dinner, the sales of weekdays were higher than that of weekend.
The sales of lunch averaged on $2400 on the weekdays, while that was less than $2000 on the weekend. Similar with lunch, the weekdays sales of dinner were about $3800, but the weekend sales of dinner were under $3000.
About lunch, Wednesday was the highest sale with $2595. On the other hand, Friday had a highest score with $4350 about dinner. When it comes to the lowest sales, both lunch and dinner were on Sunday.
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- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Sales week of October 7 13 Mon Tues Wed Thus Fri Sat Sun Lunch 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...with 595. On the other hand, Friday had a highest score with 350 about dinner. Wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 531.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5775862069 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09429537726 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 149.4 283.868780488 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9662261016 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8571428571 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11772763488 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637279450582 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102723025039 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102997312414 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103916088363 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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