More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Recently, any people prefer to have children in their old age than in their young age. I think that having children in later age has more advantages than disadvantages. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why I think so.
First, to grow children needs a lot of money. If you have children as soon as you start job after high school or university, you do not have enough money. However, you have to buy children's clothes, feed them and let them go kindergarten and so on. You will always worry about money and it is difficult to spend satisfied life. So, I think it is best that after you work for some years and accumulate money you make children.
Second, you can enjoy your young life. After you have children, you will be busy to make dinner, take care of children and clean room. You do not have much time to do what you like. I believe that there are many things I can do only when I am young. Thus, when you are young, you should do what you want to do and you must not regret.
In conclusion, when you are young, you have things what you should do. Oe is to earn money for children in the future, another is to do what you want to do. Therefore, I recommend that having children in old age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25108225108 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23203731877 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528138528139 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2375540456 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.375 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243174412019 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113208138162 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112366287407 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20868027782 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157705135659 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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