Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are some people who spent leisure time do activities that feel fun like reading and doing word puzzles, while there are some people who think it is important to spend it rest the mind. In this essay, I will explain both views and my opinion
People who like doing something is active person. They prefer do activities to rest at home. Even if they have little time, they want to do something. If they are at home without doing anything, soon they feel boring. They can not endure situation they have not what they do, they feel do something every time, such as reading books, walking outside, and so on. They are not tired even if they active all day, it is fun for them to have what they do.
On the other hand, some people like spend their time at home, they are inactive person. While beyond person like active, they want to stay at home and do not want to do something on the weekend. They just want to lay on the bed, and they finish a day without doing anything. By doing so, they can rest the mind and feel happy.
There are two types person active and inactive. People have a different character and thinking. What they like is also differ respectively. Thus, I think that it is better to use their leisure time do they want to. It is most important to live feel free and happy.
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- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.Discuss both views and give your own opinio 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34156378601 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03452894605 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477366255144 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8724039124 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9375 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265471617381 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111105427827 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110160437203 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229759966168 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140234037628 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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