The table below showss the average incomes of scientists employed by an organization

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The table below showss the average incomes of scientists employed by an organization

The table illustrates the difference of scientists’ average salaries for several jobs at an organization.
Overall, all positions see a huge difference in the number of males and females. Lab chief MD is the highest paid job among other positions whilst staff fellow PhD is the least paid. Moreover, men’s incomes surpass that of women in every positions expect for lab chief MD.
As regards lab chief MD, female doctors earn 105,696 dollars, surpassing the incomes of male doctors by 10,511 dollars. However, there are only 7 females work in this position, nearly twelve times less than that of males. Total MD, lab chief PhD, section chief MD and investigator MD are the positions that both genders get paid more than $80000 to nearly $90000. Moreover, the gaps between males and females’ average incomes of four occupations range from the lowest of $343 to $3,945, respectively. The number of women working in these positions range from 2 to 71, much less than that of men.
Total PhD, section chief Phd, investigator PhD and staff fellow PhD are the positions that pay two genders less than 80000 dollars, especially staff fellow PhD, which is the lowest paid job, with $34,642 and $31,848 respectively. While women working as lab chief MD are paid $10000 more than men, the opposite pattern can be seen in total PhD, where men are paid $9,121 more than that of females.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86324786325 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47764495506 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5378258054 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.454545455 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0680006142951 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387595357412 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706580967386 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783697809017 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955560203018 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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