The table compares the numbers of five different kinds of vehicles that were registered in Australia in three different years 2010 2012 and 2014

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The table compares the numbers of five different kinds of vehicles that were registered in Australia in three different years, 2010, 2012 and 2014.

Overall, the figures for five types of vehicles underwent an increase trend over the 3 years of 2010, 2012 and 2014. It is out in the open that passengers contributed the highest number in the use of vehicles.

Concerning Passenger vehicles’ number, it was the dominant category in 3 recorded years with the beginning data of 11.800.00 registrations to 12.700.000 in 2012 and reaching its peak of 13.000.000 in 2014. Commercial vehicles were the second-highest contribution to the registrations of 2010 at 2.300.000, experiencing a 17.4% surge to 2.700.000 after hovering at 2.600.000 registrations. The third-place belonged to the figure for motorcycles ( at 540.000), which then recorded a 30.8% growth to 709.000 in 2014.

Regarding the number of Heavy trucks and Light trucks registered, they were the least used vehicles in the 3 surveyed years. 384.000 heavy trucks are registered in 2010, followed by the figure for light trucks at over 100.000. 2 years later, both registrations went up to 390.000 and 124.000 respectively. At the end of the period, they were 8.3% and 23.5 % higher than that of the beginning data.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e belonged to the figure for motorcycles at 540.000, which then recorded a 30.8% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, second, then, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11010102064 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9308359716 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167626854926 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792920823682 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588851576065 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138933168187 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503925949587 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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