The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand s population from 1950 to 2050

Essay topics:

The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand’s population from 1950 to 2050.

The line graph illustrates the figure for New Zealand’s nationals between 1950 and the prediction in 2050.

Overall, the percentage of New Zealanders aged from 0-14 and 38-45 experienced an increase trend over the span of 100 years. Meanwhile, the 65+ and 25-37 age brackets show a reverse pattern in the given period.

Concerning the population surveyed in the 65 or more, 25-37 age group, it is evident that both figures recorded a substantial drop during the given timeline. At the beginning of the period, there was over 20% of people aged 0-14, which was a third to that of over 65 age bracket, followed by its peak of 70% in 1990. In the alike year, people aged 25-37 underwent a mild drop to 10% before plunging to 0%due to the forecast in 2050. At the end of the period, the figure for the 65 or more age category also fell down to 55%.

Regarding the growth in the population of New Zealand, the ratio of children and middle-aged people both showed a surge over course of 100 years with some fluctuations. In 1950, nearly a quarter of people aged 38-45, which was 5 times higher than the figure for the 0-14 age bracket, at 5%. 40 years later, a skyrocketing trend was seen in the population of New Zealanders who were 38-45 years old, followed by a reduction in 2000 at exactly 40% until the end of the period. However, that of children hovered around 5% before peaking at 20% in 2050 as being predicted.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 272, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bracket' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'brackets'.
Suggestion: brackets
...hich was a third to that of over 65 age bracket, followed by its peak of 70% in 1990. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, regarding, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5859375 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53557452732 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2500560574 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232214643701 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957898045477 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107127457143 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189522331556 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124556518646 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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