In the era of modernisation, junk food is the trend. The table illustrates the past, present and future consumption of different types of fast food eaten in Melbourne.
First of all, Hamburger and fried chicken are the most popular junk eaten by the people of Melbourne since 2005 and will continue this trend till 2025 where hamburgers excel in the table. In contrast to the above junks, salads and fried rice are comparitively less famous and will be following the same path in the coming years. Also, maximum of 9 units of noodles will be liked by the people of Melbourne till 2025.
There is huge increase of 15 and 41 units in liking of salads in present and future years. Around 8 units of increase in seen in fried chicken from recent to coming years of 2025 and a 2 units rise from 2005 till present years.
All in all, liking for hamburgers, fried chicken and salad follows a continous trend and will increase in future as well. But fried rice and noodles form a stable place in the table and will be same in the near future.
- The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne 73
- Many people now undertake extreme activities from hang gliding to mountain climbing Why do people risk their lives in this way and do you think is a good trend Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge or exper 73
- Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne The maps show the town s development over a period of time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words Writing Task 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53439153439 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35135037297 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5300485141 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12211568478 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633090979713 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646508639084 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926849573068 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902404268333 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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