The table show below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

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The table show below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

The table illustrates data about the proportions of people who rode a bike by age and gender in 2011.
Overall, children under 9 years old used bicycles the most, meanwhile middle-aged people were that least likely to ride a bicycle. Also, women were towards to ride a bicycle more than men in all five age groups.
As can be seen from table, amongst females, children under 9 years old showed the largest proportion of cyclists, at 51.3%. However, in during older age groups, the rates fell to 42.2% for aged from 10 - 17, and 17.1% for people aged between 18 - 39. The proportions of 40 to 59 years old rode a bicycle was the lowest, at just 12.3%, while among women aged over 60 was slightly higher, with nearly fifth riding a bicycle (18.5%).
According to the table, the percentage of boys under 9 years old who rode a bicycle was nearly the same as that of girls, at 50.3%. However, the figures for teen boys aged from 10 to 17 was just 24.6%, much lower than that of girls. Similar to women of the same age groups, men aged 18 to 39, 40 to 59, and 60 or over, did not prefer cycling very much, making up only 9.7%, 8.0% and 13.2% of total male participants, respectively

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39908256881 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29898917781 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582568807339 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7499000798 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208125713696 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926914031731 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548510310468 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142265046825 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497857762754 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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