The table illustrates the different numbers of salaries in terms of three standards (maximum, minimum and average) paid by five different employment sectors in a European country in 2009.
It is immediately apparent that Finance possessed higher numbers in all the standards and lowest salaries can be seen in the sector of hotels except the minimum salary.
The highest salary was paid by the employment sector of Finance, more than three times of hotels and double of construction and manufacturing, at 7450 Euros. Followed by transport, remarkably lower than finance but considerately higher than the rest sectors, at 5480 Euros. Apparently, compared with other sectors, finance saw a significantly higher figure regarding for minimum salaries, which was the only one over 1000 Euros. Similar numbers can be seen in other countries for this item, around 850 Euros, excepting manufacturing, which was slightly higher, at 964 Euros.
Also, the highest average salary paid by finance, and followed by manufacturing, with both more than 2000 Euros, at 2560 and 2098 Euros respectively. Transport and construction shared an equivalent figure, around 1700 Euros. Hotels saw a smallest number, only half as less as that of finance, at 1256 Euros.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...t figure, around 1700 Euros. Hotels saw a smallest number, only half as less as t...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...aw a smallest number, only half as less as that of finance, at 1256 Euros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38265306122 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87205927686 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0154287925 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209626174211 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959077740308 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153201532802 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183788777298 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19159830685 0.0819641961636 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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