The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows the sales records for banana and coffee in five European countries and makes sakes comparisons between year 1999 and 2004.
In the year 2004, the sales of coffee increased almost 10 times in the UK from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million euros in 2004.Also the coffee sales in Switzerland during 2004 (6 million euros) was twice that of in 1999 (3 million Euros), whereas there were only slight increases in coffee sales over the five years in the other three European countries.
Comparatively the total sales for Fairtrade Bananas has been greater overall in both 1999 and 2004 than the total coffee sales across all countries.
The Banana sales during 2004 increased six times in Switzerland (15-47 million euros) as compared to 1999, whereas increased only a bit for UK 1-5.5 million euros) and Belgium (0.6 million - 4 million euros) over the five years. On the contrary, the sales figures for Bananas dropped in Sweden and Denmark from 1999 to 2004 showing sales from 1.8 to1 million euros and from 2 to 0.9 million euros respectively.
Overall, the highest sales of Banana during the year 1999 and 2004 was in Switzerland and the highest sales of coffee during these years was in UK.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32714923947 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8516461405 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.833333333 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229626513788 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162360833091 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913173203644 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180621668645 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896656390307 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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