The given tables illustrate the amount of money sale gained by selling coffee and bananas in 5 different European countries including UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden between 1999 and 2004.
It is clear that in both years, people in 5 European countries are likely to consume bananas rather than coffee. In addition, Switzerland and the UK are nations where coffee and bananas were the most traded at the same time.
According to coffee’ turnover, Switzerland earned 3 million euro, followed by 1,8 and 1,5 million euro in Denmark and the Uk in 1999. In contrast, this commodity in Belgium and Sweden accounted for 1 and 0,8 million euro from selling. However, until 2004, the amount of money gained by trading coffee in 5 countries increased steadily, especially in the UK, at 20 million euro. Switzerland merely ranked second in trading, at 6 million euro in 2004.
Looking at bananas’ sales, Switzerland was a country that had the highest amount of money earned by selling bananas, at 15 million euro in 1999, was higher than that of Denmark, at 2 million euro. During the period of 5 years, the amount of money gained by selling this fruit went up significantly in 3 European countries including Switzerland (47 million euro), UK (5,5 million euro), and Belgium (4 million euro), whereas that of Sweden and Denmark experienced a decrease slightly, around 1 million euro. However, the amount of money earned by selling bananas was higher than that of coffee from 1999 to 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
..., the amount of money gained by selling this fruit went up significantly in 3 Europe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, whereas, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95219123506 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64251869118 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470119521912 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1763760883 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142284453698 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817059238481 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636989404612 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130896590423 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694522642792 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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