The table charts given indicate sales two types of Fairtrade-labelled products the years 1999 and 2004 in the UK,Switzerland,Denmark,Belgium and Sweden. The products are coffee and bananas.
Overall, sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in every countries showed an increase from 1999 to 2004 exclude the figures of bananas in Sweden and Denmark.
To be specific, sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee experienced a rise generally. In the UK, sales had noticeable increase from 1.5 millions of euros to 2 millions of euros. Meanwhile, the figure if Switzerland doubled from 3 millions to 6 millions. The sales in Denmark and Sweden went up same amount as 0.2 millions from 1.8 millions to 2 millions and from 0.8 millions to 1 millions each.
In terms of the amount sold bananas, the figure if Switzerland just over tripled from 15 millions to 47 millions. In the UK, the sales showed a growth from 1 millions to 5.5 millions. The sales of Fairtrade-labelled bananas in Belgium increased as 3.6 millions from 0.6 millions to 4 millions. However, sales in Sweden and Denmark showed opposite pattern, that experienced a drop during entire given period. Sweden went down from 1.8 millions to 1 millions and Denmark fell from 2 millions to 0.9 millions
- The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 56
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 56
- The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Switzerland
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Belgium
...9 and 2004 in the UK,Switzerland,Denmark,Belgium and Sweden. The products are coffee and...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
... increase from 1.5 millions of euros to 2 millions of euros. Meanwhile, the figure if Switzer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14077669903 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58502622662 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45145631068 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4270572993 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178590823108 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997400656944 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108656800633 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18356273062 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115102771416 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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