The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given tables below illustrate the data about consumption of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in some European countries. The sale-price are given in millions of Euros, while the coffee and bananas are producted by farmers from developing countries and have been paid officially agreed fair price.
As a general trend, UK is the largest market of coffee and Switzerland people prefer Fairtrade-labelled bananas in 2004.
As the given information, all the labelled coffee and bananas are witnessed a dramatically increase in the period of five years. In 1999, the highest amount of consumed coffee is exactly 3 millions of Euros in Switzerland, but in 2004, these is a boom of sales in UK, and it reached a peak at 20 millions. Beside of this, Sweden, Denmark and Belgium people don’t like coffee so much that the sales is only around 2 millions.
Moving to the Fairtrade-labelled bananas, Switzerland people are the most love it, the sales came up from 15 millions of Euros to 47 millions between 1999 and 2004. UK is the second largest market, but the sales is only one ninth of Switzerland, exactly 5.5. However, Belgium, Sweden and Denmark are at least consumption again, with a slightly growth of sales.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...st amount of consumed coffee is exactly 3 millions of Euros in Switzerland, but in 2004, thes...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...he most love it, the sales came up from 15 millions of Euros to 47 millions between 1999 and 2...
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Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...rk are at least consumption again, with a slightly growth of sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03381642512 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05565389084 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3625563062 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390980985647 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17934405267 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152760417947 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240008547677 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978044725226 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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