The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should sp

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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Two tables indicate the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Overall, the details of the two tables were different. Firstly, the temperatures in Sydney were higher than in London on both three days. Secondly, the time when the sunrise emerged in Sydney was sooner than in London, too. However, the sunset in London disappeared quickly than in Sydney.

On the one hand, in London, on Friday 28th, there were 13 degrees Celcius which was the maximum degree of three days and the most minimum temperature was 3 degrees Celcius on Saturday 29th. However, in Sydney, the highest degree was 31 degrees Celcius on Sunday 30th of three days and the lowest one was 17 degrees Celcius on Friday 28th.

On the other hand, in London, the sunrise emerged at 8:05 am on Friday 28th. Besides that, on Saturday 29th and Sunday 30th, the sunrise appeared at 8:06 am. Oppositely, on both Friday 28th and Saturday 29th, the time when the sun rose was 5:45 am and on Sunday 30th, 5:46 am, perspectively.

Moreover, in London, the sun fell at 3:57 pm on Friday the 28th. On two days, which were Saturday 29th and Sunday 30th, at 3:58 pm and 3:59 pm, perspectively. However, in Sydney, on Friday 28th, at 8:06 pm when the sun disappeared and on other days, Saturday 29th and Sunday 30th, at 8:07 pm

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70042194093 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39466997025 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409282700422 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 3.36585365854 475% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1825264413 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6923076923 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110643228349 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638100223848 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105964811234 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118861703001 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153814625726 0.0819641961636 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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