The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables compare the same weekend in London and Sydney in terms of temperatures and daylight duration in Decemeber 2018.

In general, the climate in Sydney was much hotter, and daylight in also lasted significantly longer than those of London.

As shown in the table of London, the the minimum and maximum temperature was 3 and 13 degree celsius on Saturday, whereas its of Friday and Sunday was 4 to 9 degree celsius and 5 to 10 degree celsius, respectively. Furthermore, the sun rose and almost at the same time on all three days, around 08:06. Meanwhile, setting hours revolved around 15:58, with the earliest was Friday, at 15:57, and the latest was Sunday, at 15:59.

On the other hand, the table of Sydney shows that the maximum temperature was 31 celsius degree on Sunday, and the minimun one was on Friday, at 17 degree celsius. Besides, temperature of Saturday was 18 to 28 degree celsius. Moreover, the sunrise stayed almost unchanged, at 5:45 on Friday and Saturday and 5:46 on Sunday. Additionally, the sun set at 20:06 on Friday and 20:07 on Saturday and Sunday

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... temperature was 3 and 13 degree celsius on Saturday, whereas its of Friday and S...
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... Friday and 20:07 on Saturday and Sunday
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65236365376 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8233845495 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115524270262 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653556292516 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088520334976 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121683973127 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106501396089 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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