Task 1: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The pie charts illustrate the energy consumption of an average Australian family divided into six categories and the amount of greenhouse gas released into the air due to this energy use. Overall, the majority of the consumed energy is for heating, water heating as well as other appliances, which are also the main causes of greenhouse gas emissions.
The usage for heating accounted for the largest percentage of 42%, almost half of the total consumed energy. Following closely is the consumption of water heating, at 30%, being the second largest source of energy use. While the amount of energy spent on heating is larger than that of water heating, water heating makes up a significantly higher figure for greenhouse gas emissions compared to its counterpart, at 32% and 15%, respectively. The usage of energy for other appliances, though occupies only 15% of the total consumption, contributes 28% to the emitted greenhouse gas.
On the other hand, the proportion of energy used for cooling, lighting, and refrigeration is the lowest of all, at 2%, 4%, and 7%, consecutively. These are also the groups that make the smallest attribution to the total amount of released greenhouse gas, with 3% for cooling, 8% for lighting, and 14% for refrigeration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1359223301 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93160480296 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3618962652 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.25 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236302925909 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114442436523 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089125795132 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17890532733 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985096462802 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.