task 1: The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030.
The line graph illustrates the amount of oil is used by 4 vital consumers over the period of 21 years from 2009 to 2030.
Overall, it is clear that the total of oil used in US, Western Europe and Japan decrease, while the figures for China, ME increase. Additionally, the figure for the US is by far highest over the research period.
In 2009, the amount of oil used in the US began at 10 million barrels per day and the remained steadily for 6 years. This was followed by W at around 4 million barrels each day. China and Me had the similar figure, which was at about under 2 million barrels. The figure for the US is expected to drop dramatically by over 5 million to 4, 2 million barrel per day at the end of the research period.
In 2030, the amount of oil used in WE at is thought to decrease gradually from 3,4 million barrels to 2,2 million barrels. The figure for China and ME was the lowest value in 2015, standing at about 3 million barrels and exactly 2 million barrels respectively. Those are expected to 3,4 million for China and above 3 million for the Middle East
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39753493808 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8484636432 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149560899045 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773470010324 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977849690236 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1347050433 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108072306463 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.