task 1: the number of marriages and divorces
The first bar chart compares the number of marriages and divorces in US residents from 1970 to 2000. The second chart illustrates adult Americans in terms of marital status in the years 1970 and 2000.
Overall, it is clear from that the number of marriage was higher than that of divorces over the 30-year period. Additionally, divorced accounted for the lowest percentage of adult Americans in both years.
The number of marriage began at 2.5 million and remained stable in next decade in 1970. At the same time, the figure for divorces was much lower, only at 1 million. Despite some fluctuations, the number of divorces unchanged after 30 years. However, Marriages saw a gradual decline by 0.5 million, ending at exactly 2 million in 2000.
Looking more closely at the second chart, we can see that the percentage of adult Americans married was highest in 1970, compared with never married and widowed, at about 15% and nearly 10% respectively. Only approximately 1% was the figure for divorced in 1970. in 2000, although the proportion of marriage fell to 60%, it also was the highest number of the whole bar chart. Meanwhile, never married and divorce witnessed a rise while the percentage of widowed decreased to roughly 5% at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...1% was the figure for divorced in 1970. in 2000, although the proportion of marria...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91121495327 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61779437891 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.598357484 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5833333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287356322054 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130248822285 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944865546829 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206414642876 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516093681779 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.