task 1: the number of marriages
The first bar chart compares the number of marriage and divorces in US residents from 1970 to 2000. The second chart illustrates adult Americans in terms of marital status in the years 1970 and 2000.
Overall, it is clear from that the number of marriage was higher than that of divorces over the 30-year period. Additionally, divorced accounted for the lowest percentage of adult Americans in both years.
the number of marriage began at 2.5 million and remained stable in next decade. At the same time, the figure for divorces was much lower. Only at 1 million. Despite some fluctuations, the number of divorces unchanged at the end of the period.
However, Marriages saw a gradual decline by 0.5 million, ending at exactly 2 million in 2000.
Looking more closely at the second chart, we can see that the percentage of adult Americans married was highest in 1970, compared with never married and widowed, at about 15% and nearly 10% respectively. Only approximately 1% was the figure for divorced in 1970. in 2000, although the proportion of marriage fell to 60%, it also was the highest number of the whole bar chart. Meanwhile, never married and divorce witnessed a rise while the percentage of widowed decreased to roughly 5% at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ge of adult Americans in both years. the number of marriage began at 2.5 million...
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Line 8, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...1% was the figure for divorced in 1970. in 2000, although the proportion of marria...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8976744186 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62011192112 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539534883721 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0157761298 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180860702798 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830095087105 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098159596784 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120961005335 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323958403451 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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