TASK ONE:
The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.’
The diagram illustrates the transformation of town of Denham from year 1986 to present time. As an overview, it is apparent that there are a lot of changes happened in the town of Denham , like the farmlands in the past were all turned to housing areas, the gardens were replaced by a retirement home, the shops are no longer available in present time. Meanwhile, the river Stoke waterways remained the same as well as the post office and still the exact spot for the primary school location with little adjustment to its size from the previous one.
To start with in year 1986, the farmland areas were rampant throughout the town of Denham, located southwest of the town and also on the northeast side of it. Meanwhile as years passed by, in farmland were converted into residential site. The post office remained its structure until the present day as well as the bridge and primary school but there are two houses located nearby the school area. Furthemore, there gardens in the past were no longer available in present time since I was converted into a retirement home from the three large houses from the past, they attached two large houses from the nortwing and south wing respectively. Exactly opposite to the retirement home is an empty square block sorrounded by nine houses along side the river Stoke. Indeed, a lot of transformation happened throughout the year.
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- PROPOSITION Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely Others think this is a waste of financial resources PROMPT Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- TASK ONE The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f changes happened in the town of Denham , like the farmlands in the past were all...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...n and also on the northeast side of it. Meanwhile as years passed by, in farmland were co...
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Line 2, column 734, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
... square block sorrounded by nine houses along side the river Stoke. Indeed, a lot of trans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, well, while, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83474576271 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56582413785 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533898305085 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9045754954 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150870284411 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671506942664 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623534569688 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135412691747 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225144929193 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.