Task1 - 2: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The given table illustrates the proportions of cyclists among a town’s population in 2011 in accordance to 5 different age groups.
Overall, for all surveyed age groups, the higher proportions always belong to women. In addition, bicycles were mostly risen by children who are under 9-year-old contrasting to the lowest figures for the age group of 40-59.
First of all, while 51.3% and 42.2% were the figure for females who were younger than 9 and in the 10-17 age group, the figures for men were considerably lower with 50.3% and 24.6% respectively. There was a slightly decrease in the proportions for both genders when surveying 18-39 and 40-59 age group and this decline demonstrated by 17.1%, 12.3% for females and 9.7%, 8.0% for males accordingly.
Furthermore, when implementing the statistic in the percentages of cyclists who were older than 60-year-old, the result showed that there were only 13.2% of male population interested in cycling in comparison to a bit higher at 18% for females.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...50.3% and 24.6% respectively. There was a slightly decrease in the proportions for both genders whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2012195122 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91631113099 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.651105296 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198219088668 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106588407494 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614605486563 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135114521127 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526057939934 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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