The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea.
Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The diagrams illustrates the development in the coastal zone of Brightsea from 1950 to nowadays, and also depicts the future expansion plan of the area.
Overall,it can be clearly seen that the growth of a region with only a few buildings into one with basic amenities over the 72-year period. Also, a well thought future plan will make the area more appealing.
In 1950, there were no roads at all, and only 4 buildings can be seen in the coastal zone of Brightsea - a lighthouse, a lighthouse’s keeper’s house, fishermen’s cottages, and a jetty. However, today’s coastal zone is much more developed with roads connected to all places, as well as a ferry wharf, and a small shop. A new cafe has appeared in the place of fishermen’s cottages, while the lighthouse keeper’s house has made way for a hotel.
According to the proposed plan, there will be a new ferry wharf in the southern area, and a sailing club will also emerge alongside with it. Moreover, the hotel will expand in an easterly direction, whereas the small shop will be reconstructed as a big supermarket with a car park. In addition, a new restaurant and apartments will overtake the land currently occupied by the cafe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...e expansion plan of the area. Overall,it can be clearly seen that the growth of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87378640777 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87687547843 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1178385879 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.555555556 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123218350429 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057339989405 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644909339826 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934232545081 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764712134992 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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