The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts represents the expenditure by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
In all the three years the maximum amount has been spent on Higher education. In 1980 nearly one third of the total was spent on higher education. In 1990, it increased about 10% and in 2000 it gradually decreased by 5%.There are three other major sectors namely k-12 education, transportation and human resources.
All together they made up to half of the total expenditure. K-12 represented to 25% in 1980 which later on dropped 20% in 1990 and even lower in 2000. Transportation had a lot of variation in the past years and holds around 20% in 2000 which is the maximum in the particular section. Health and human resources tend to decrease when there is raise transport expenditure. The rest of the sales in covered by Environmental services and other expenditures.
Higher education had lead to the maximum expenditure and it also seems to drop in the 20th century and further. The rest of the sectors are oscillating in various years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he total was spent on higher education. In 1990, it increased about 10% and in 200...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...nd in 2000 it gradually decreased by 5%.There are three other major sectors namely k-...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218905472637 0.268076937826 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.129353233831 0.116061578633 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0945273631841 0.0759168565197 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497512437811 0.0366838410393 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0199004975124 0.0131127313244 152% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129353233831 0.155750635184 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0348258706468 0.0379272487307 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85351743089 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0248756218905 0.0210936926555 118% => OK
Particles: 0.00497512437811 0.00175180941692 284% => OK
Determiners: 0.0845771144279 0.0948980150116 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.00967000014798 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1062.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283333333333 0.337110787985 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222222222222 0.247514529752 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172222222222 0.171178102325 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133333333333 0.112407865282 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85351743089 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 50.860174849 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0094962315 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7215676592 42.9750493124 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 135.714022679 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.0094962315 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 37.2222222222 47.7609492067 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.925 2.94281807926 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516161105329 0.418131533498 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110720614179 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103979329872 0.0850326197045 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.611503343593 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183132289612 0.157042692854 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239048153934 0.228904883108 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149571101756 0.108899403657 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.415298549503 0.367819155151 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734989945849 0.0812612215331 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.421080104107 0.316326947829 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117043214269 0.0921553760075 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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