Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
Professionals such as doctors, nurses and teachers are people who are needed in our personal day to day life. Playing an important role in our lives, these people are always undervalued as well as paid less. Whereas people like film actors or company bosses earn more money for their work they do not deserve. I should say that I completely agree to the inequality prevailing here.
Talking about the educated professionals there are merits and demerits about them. These people work throughout the year in order to serve the people as well as for their income. Doctors and nurses are highly skille...
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- Some people feel that certain workers like nurses doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion:
...hers should be paid more. 280 words.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'as for', 'such as', 'talking about', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240687679083 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.183381088825 0.155533422707 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659025787966 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0630372492837 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0744985673352 0.0437548338989 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100286532951 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0515759312321 0.0403226058552 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41619629483 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343839541547 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716332378223 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143266475645 0.021408717616 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143266475645 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1803.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72380952381 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307936507937 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196825396825 0.28420135186 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11746031746 0.203846283523 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0603174603175 0.137316102897 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.41619629483 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526984126984 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.4848681789 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3181818182 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8656680213 49.517814964 44% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9545454545 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3181818182 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.814263465372 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 34.0007215007 49.1944974215 69% => OK
Elegance: 1.22321428571 1.69124875643 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461179578797 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0835063328453 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0821079218648 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484910849548 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112546378571 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14796071211 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752684411747 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282244874883 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0999247826204 0.0638462369009 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283240872405 0.228012699653 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380581025004 0.058150111329 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.41683366733 293% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.