The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000

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The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000.

The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000.
The given bar chart illustrates how many kimlometers were traveled by the British using various ways of transport in the UK from a report between 1990 and 2000
What stands out from the bar chart is that while Passenger kilometers by air, bus, rail and total witnessed a progress. The opposite trend was true for those by bicycle and motorbike. Besides, the bus users measured by kilometer were always the highest.
Starting at the highest point in 1990 at more than 40 billion kilometers were the number of people travelling by bus, and those by rail ranked second with a bit lower at exactly 40 billion kilometers in Britain. These two figures by bus and by rail then experienced a surge in the next ten years at nearly the same number of approximately 45 billion kilometers. The total number of passenger kilometers communed by all 5 vehicles witnessed the same trends from 100 billion kilometers in 1990 to roughly 115 billion kilometers in 2000.
Finally, all three remaining different means of transports in 1990 were under 10 billion kilometers. Bicycle and motorbike riders experienced a slight reduce to roughly 4 billion kilometers and 6 billion kilometers respectively in 2000. In contrast, Air travelers measured by kilometers which was the lowest in the year 1990 became the most popular among the three mentioned in 2000

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sing various ways of transport in the UK from a report between 1990 and 2000 Wha...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...s by air, bus, rail and total witnessed a progress. The opposite trend was true for those ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s, rail and total witnessed a progress. The opposite trend was true for those by bi...
^^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghest. Starting at the highest point in 1990 at more than 40 billion kilometers ...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of people travelling by bus, and those by rail ranked second with a bit ...
^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le travelling by bus, and those by rail ranked second with a bit lower at exactl...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, second, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96734693878 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74246838839 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6913869682 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.7 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33952617471 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175380845438 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.288627134485 0.0843802449381 342% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319556092873 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.348994206659 0.0819641961636 426% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sing various ways of transport in the UK from a report between 1990 and 2000 Wha...
^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...s by air, bus, rail and total witnessed a progress. The opposite trend was true for those ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s, rail and total witnessed a progress. The opposite trend was true for those by bi...
^^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghest. Starting at the highest point in 1990 at more than 40 billion kilometers ...
^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of people travelling by bus, and those by rail ranked second with a bit ...
^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le travelling by bus, and those by rail ranked second with a bit lower at exactl...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, second, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96734693878 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74246838839 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6913869682 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.7 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33952617471 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175380845438 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.288627134485 0.0843802449381 342% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319556092873 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.348994206659 0.0819641961636 426% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.