The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary
The two maps illustrate the development of an island after the construction for tourism purposes compared to its natural before.
Overall, there is a rising of infrastructure and transportation on the island. This has changed an island with nothing into a place for tourism.
On the before map, there is only land and trees surrounded by sea. there are no signal of human living in this part. However, after the construction, the growth of accommodation and other facilities give a sense of humanity to this place. In addition, there is a harbor that helps in moving from or to this island. It also uses a beach for swimming purpose, which does not have before. More over, an opening of a restaurant gives a feeling of full essential needs for people visiting here. Therefore, this development helps to build an island to become a better place.
- The chart below shows the percentage of young people taking part in different outdoor sports from 1975 to the present day in the South West of England Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where releva 93
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where r 67
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary 56
- There are many Vietnamese people who claim that we should merge the Solar New Year and the Lunar New Year. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... only land and trees surrounded by sea. there are no signal of human living in this p...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95862068966 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84783331287 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3312556191 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.9 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150441541682 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593985486533 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550575106586 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124581844235 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537891108598 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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