the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show how an island changes before and after some facilities are constructed.
According to the first map, the narrow island is approximately 250 meters long. There is a beach on the west and some trees in the eastern and western side of the island.
Turning to the second map, two accommodation areas have been built and each consists of several houses which are laid out in circular shape and connected by footpath. Between the two accommodation area, there is a reception surrounded by a vehicle track which leads to the restaurant in the north and to the pier in the south, and people can go sailing. Another dramatic change is that the beach has been fully developed and people can go swimming via a footpath linking the beach and the western accommodation area.
Overall, after the construction of these facilities, there are significant changes on the island and it has become an ideal place for leisure activities.
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 82
- Some people say the government should give health care the first priorities some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers money Discuss both views and give your own opinion 69
- News media has become more influential in people's lives. Others believe it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In some countries there has been an increasing number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...sland is approximately 250 meters long. there is a beach on the west and some trees i...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...lt and each consists of several houses. these houses are laid out in circular shape a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73832036794 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3256538444 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203337864157 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847545593123 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101711123676 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161524831184 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110122434198 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.