The two maps show the changes to an island which has been developed for tourists.
Overall, the island constructed some facilities to attract tourists, such as several accommodations, footpath, restaurant and some entertaining activities like swimming and yachting.
There was no man-made structures on the island before, but now, a number of facilities have been added for visitors. In the middle of the island is a reception, connecting a restaurant through a vehicle track. Some accommodations have been built surrounding the reception from the east to the west of the island, linked by footpaths.
These footpaths also lead to other new features of the island. First, a pier is located in the southern tip on the island, people can go to yachting there. The other is the beach on the west side which developed for swimming. In contrast, the eastern part of the island remains undeveloped with nothing apart from trees.
- Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the modern buildings To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the modern buildings To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, apart from, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14569536424 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93043177294 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635761589404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0352032714 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256721298777 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942026294859 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083084215045 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167310283377 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795207011699 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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