The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The pictures illustrate the changes that have occured in an island before and after some tourist facilities are built.
Overall, it is obvious that this area has undergone a number of significant changes, some of the most dramatic of which are the construction of accomodation, restaurant as well as swimming catering for recreational purpose. Additionally, these innovations have no adverse impacts on natural resources of the island.
Before the renovation, there were only beaches and trees on this island and most of the places were empty. After being constructed, small huts have been constructed so as to accommodate the tourists to the island. Another striking change is the construction of a reception in the middle, and a restaurant in the north of the reception. It is interesting to note that trees haven’t been chopped down to make way for new facilities.
Moreover, beside the addition of many buildings, a pier, where boats can dock, are erected. Additionally, there is a swimming in order to meet the tourists’ needs. A notable change has been the introduction of footpaths connecting with the huts and a vehicle track, which link the reception with the mentioned pier and the restaurant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ucted, small huts have been constructed so as to accommodate the tourists to the island....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2193877551 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05118677452 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3916265317 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243970216061 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910394525462 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115213910858 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166508804511 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139385371758 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.