The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two supported maps illustrate how an island has been changed after a number of tourist facilities were constructed.
Turning to the first map, it can be seen that the island, which is surrounded by the sea, had a several number of palm trees and a beach in the west.
Moving on to the second map, it is noticeable that that two housing areas are established, one of each enclose the palm trees on the western part of the island. Moreover, the houses, that form these residential areas, are connected to each other through a footpath. Between these tents there are a restaurant in the north, a pier in the south and a reception that is situated right in the middle, dividing them, but on the contrary, is surrounded by a vehicle track that links these two facilities together.
In addition, anybody who has a desire to go sailing should follow this vehicle track that will bring to the described pier above. Furthermore, the beach, that is on the western corner of the map, is now adapted and equipped for swimming.
Overal, it is obvious that there has been a considerable amount of developments done during the construction which has led to more buildings, better infrastructure and quicker access.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
..., which is surrounded by the sea, had a several number of palm trees and a beach in the west. ...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: restaurants
...otpath. Between these tents there are a restaurant in the north, a pier in the south and a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'in addition', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221276595745 0.268076937826 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.182978723404 0.116061578633 158% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0553191489362 0.0759168565197 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0212765957447 0.0366838410393 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0170212765957 0.0131127313244 130% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114893617021 0.155750635184 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0808510638298 0.0379272487307 213% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74432676825 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0255319148936 0.0210936926555 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.157446808511 0.0948980150116 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127659574468 0.00437022459523 292% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0340425531915 0.00967000014798 352% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1211.0 1161.00487805 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.9 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79425837321 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325358851675 0.337110787985 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248803827751 0.247514529752 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138755980861 0.171178102325 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124401913876 0.112407865282 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74432676825 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 54.8478527134 49.3433353143 111% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 26.125 23.0094962315 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2572248301 42.9750493124 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.375 135.714022679 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 23.0094962315 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 51.0053827751 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.88461538462 2.94281807926 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3935624769 0.418131533498 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.170559174752 0.181151798455 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0871932858054 0.0850326197045 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.795509826204 0.706616315825 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17349743865 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214220126213 0.228904883108 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950553363966 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32919848657 0.367819155151 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.14291879015 0.0812612215331 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259457211945 0.316326947829 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653567842323 0.0921553760075 71% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.