The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The map below presents an island , before and after the construction of some tourist facilities . By comparison many new building have been build for tourist pleasure.
Before urbanization this place was empty and surrounded by sea and beach . Also it was look like that it was not well place for tourists where they could hang out.
After manufacturization and some arrangement, island become more viewable . New Reception was settled at the mid and circled by vehicle track what makes comfotrtable check in for tourists. Also, new accommodations and restaurant soared out for clients issue and comfort. Moreover for tourists grand stay architectures build new swimming pool area at the west side of island. For extreme lover guests there were invented Pier where they could rent a boats.
Additionally I am happy to say that no tree were cutted by builders . They could rise everything without harming nature .
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 56
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
The map below presents an island , before and after the construction of so...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... construction of some tourist facilities . By comparison many new building have be...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as empty and surrounded by sea and beach . Also it was look like that it was not ...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...empty and surrounded by sea and beach . Also it was look like that it was not well ...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nded by sea and beach . Also it was look like that it was not well place for tour...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...could hang out. After manufacturization and some arrangement, island become more...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...arrangement, island become more viewable . New Reception was settled at the mid ...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... . New Reception was settled at the mid and circled by vehicle track what makes ...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...e track what makes comfotrtable check in for tourists. Also, new accommodations a...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... restaurant soared out for clients issue and comfort. Moreover for tourists grand...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...red out for clients issue and comfort. Moreover for tourists grand stay architectures ...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...er for tourists grand stay architectures build new swimming pool area at the west...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a boat' or simply 'boats'?
Suggestion: a boat; boats
...ere invented Pier where they could rent a boats. Additionally I am happy to say that ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ed Pier where they could rent a boats. Additionally I am happy to say that no tree were cu...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ts. Additionally I am happy to say that no tree were cutted by builders . They c...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ay that no tree were cutted by builders . They could rise everything without harm...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d rise everything without harming nature .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87379608137 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.734693877551 0.547539520022 134% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.9452204432 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5454545455 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217210289649 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950282592694 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182401305537 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141892952305 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164706689297 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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