The the two maps below show road access to a city hospital 2007 and 2010
The two maps illustrate the road way lane to a hospital and changes took place in the year 2007 and in 2010.
Overall, there are many modifications are done for the road way towards hospital, bus stops in the year 2007 are now replaced by a bus station, also combined car parking for both staff and public was divided, and constructed in a different areas nearby hospital in 2010.
Firstly, Ring road around the hospital remained same in both 2007 and 2010 with no expansion, however it was later modified towards east, by constructing the car parking facility for the public which earlier a combined parking lot for both public and staff. Furthermore, car parking which is exclusive for the staff was build near the hospital road replacing bus stops.
Secondly, three bus stops towards the either side of hospital roads were demolished, and then allowed to build a big bus station in the east for the better transportation, not allow any congestion. Interestingly, hospital road towards city hospital in the year 2010 was totally modified by providing two roundabouts opposite to hospital and another near city road. These help providing exit for staff car parking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...divided, and constructed in a different areas nearby hospital in 2010. Firstly, Ri...
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Line 6, column 377, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to provide' or 'provide'.
Suggestion: to provide; provide
... and another near city road. These help providing exit for staff car parking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67191105853 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9392883177 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281454712516 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15939865858 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13422983702 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214241926829 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991141994815 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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