A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be
spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an argument that old buildings should be demolished, instead of spending money on repairing them. Construct new ones. I totally agree with the statement, build new ones instead of repairing them.
Firstly, there are many buildings which are 100 to 150 years old, in many popular cities in the world. These buildings are always dangerous to stay. Because buildings may have already lost the capacity to hold to any natural calamities. For Instance, countries like Indonesia, earthquakes are quite common buildings might collapse at any time. Also, staying in such buildings may take their lives. Therefore, staying in such old buildings is always dangerous.
Secondly, Investing the amount in repairing these buildings is totally a waste. Nowadays, labor wages, the raw material cost has gone high. Instead, people should spend money on constructing newer, by demolishing the older buildings. According to some recent surveys, 50% of the buildings in popular cities are more than 100 years old. The government should help people in identifying older buildings which are not safe to stay, help them to demolish at free of cost. Spending money in repairing is totally a waste, rather investing in constructing newer.
To Conclude, I totally agree, staying in the older buildings is always dangerous, which may lead to loss of life. The government should help in identifying older buildings as well as, an easy way to demolish. Build a new house, stay safer.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...buildings are always dangerous to stay. Because, buildings may have already lost the ca...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30901287554 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69123695714 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6608400437 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7222222222 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416163614767 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145032879996 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914231742636 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285082837918 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098277450057 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...buildings are always dangerous to stay. Because, buildings may have already lost the ca...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30901287554 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69123695714 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6608400437 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7222222222 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416163614767 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145032879996 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914231742636 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285082837918 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098277450057 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.