The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Essay topics:

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps reveal modifications in transport infrastructure to a city hospital in two separate years, 2007 and 2010. It is seen that the construction of bus stations, parking places, and roundabouts is the primary difference between there years surveyed.

In terms of parking spaces, the original car park located on the east side, which is used by both public and staff, is divided into detached places after three years. To be exact, the staff car park is still in the initial place while the additional public one is constructed on the northeastern side, accessed via the ring road.

Regarding bus facilities, it can be seen that three bus stops on either side of the hospital road in 2007 were then removed in 2010, making way for a new bus stop situated on the southwest side. This new bus station is accessed via the two new roundabouts, in which the first roundabout appeared at the end of hospital road, at the junction with ring road, and the second one is constructed at the four-way intersection of the city road and hospital road respectively, which made the road system more expanded.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82105263158 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74793299301 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0442555321 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298755485266 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142911073197 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146033067319 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196843525443 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107273776082 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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