The chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010

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The chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010.

The chart reveals how physically active Australian males and females in six different categories were on a regular basis in the year of 2010. Overall, women were physically active more than their counterparts on average. Additionally, the figure for women aged 45-54 was the highest while that for men aged 35-44 was the lowest.

It can be seen that the rate of males exercised regularly only witnessed a higher value than that of females in the category of 15-to 24-year-olds, 52.8% compared with 47.7%. Regarding the remaining age groups, the significant difference can be seen in people aged 35-44. To be exact, the proportion of females who did daily physical activity was 13% more than males did, 52.5% as opposed to 39.5%. On the contrary, an identical value can be seen in the figure for people aged 65 and over, standing at nearly 47.1% for each gender. In terms of the two categories of those aged 45-54 and 55-64, the rate of females and males who did daily exercise was almost equal, at the average of 53% in each female’s group and 44% in each male’s one. A negligible proportion can be seen in the group of ages 25 and 34, 48.9% belonged to the figure for women and 42.2% went to that for men respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68055555556 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55887046814 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532407407407 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9076200034 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151169095364 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791301626006 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921494642646 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177155094981 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123669870556 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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