The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more between 1984 and 2003.
The chart reveals changes in the proportion of people going to the cinema once a month or more based on the four different age groups during a 20-year-period. Overall, all categories witnessed an upward trend despite some fluctuation over the time surveyed.
It can be seen that the rate of 15-to-24-year-old people visiting the cinema group always possessed the highest position. To be exact, the figure for this stayed well beyond the others, accounting for 15% in the first year and then reached a peak of approximately 52% in the last year after experiencing a significant fluctuation. By contrast, that for moviegoers who are over 35 years old possessed the lowest rate among all categories, increasing from roughly 3% in 1984 to a peak of over 10% in 2003.
There was a remarkable growth in the proportion of people aged 25-35 which its figure fluctuated noticeably before reaching the highest point at 30%. Regarding the rate of 25-35-year-old moviegoers, although possessing a higher figure during an 18-year-period, this percentage decreased to an equal low compared with the category of “25-35 age group”, at 30%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16304347826 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1531295403 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.182461716 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187611521885 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917133711951 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106269810465 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135732158886 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772724440609 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.