The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two maps present ways to a city hospital in two different years : 2007 and 2010
In both maps, the city hospital is surrounded by Ring Road. There are parking areas for staff and also public. These are the features that the two maps have in common.
However, there are some things that do exist in the 2010 map but didn’t in 2007. They are the two roundabouts that are placed where Hospital Road intersects with City and Ring Road. Instead of bus stops in 2007, a bus station is installed in the 2010 map. The 2007 old car park turns to for staff only in 2010, and there is an extra parking area just for the public at the East-side of the city hospital.
Overall, according to the two maps, there are some features in the 2007 map that still remain in 2010 : City hospital and car park. On the other hand, new facilities such as around-turns, bus station and separate parking areas are also installed in the year of 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, as for, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43023255814 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19714680644 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2246079651 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283528953579 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130593452227 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850465476604 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203233314129 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437125329928 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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