The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps below show road access to city hospital; in 2007 and in 2010.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate road access related to a city hospital change considerably in its form in 2007 and in 2010.
It is obvious that, the city hospital has expanded by public car park which located on north—east of the map. Bus station and two roundabout have crucial role to access of vehicles to whole of the city.
As can be seen, the size of the city hospital has not changed in 2007 and in 2010, while add two roundabout in entire and end of hospital Rd which has to bus station located next to it. The bus stops has two availability to the north and the south of Hospital Rd which in the south has a junction by city road. A public car park located close to the city hospital that has own entrance in the east of ring road in 2010. Another entry is for staff car park. These two staff car park and public car park separated with each own entry in 2010. By 2010 there were six bus stop that demolished.
As a result, the new city hospital has more facilities with better road accessibility.

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