The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The maps give information about the changes of transporting infrastructure of a city hospital from 2007 to 2010.
Overall, new remarkable facilities had been built to support both accessing the hospital and parking.
The city hospital was surrounded by a ring road, with the main entrance in the south connecting to the city road via a hospital road. In 2007, the hospital road had 3 small bus stops on each western and eastern side. After 3 years of development, 2 roundabouts were constructed at the intersections with the ring road and city road, linked with a new larger area in the west of the hospital road for bus station.
In terms of parking, at the beginning of the period, there was a section for this purpose located on the east of the hospital road with only one entry point from the ring road, to satisfy car-parking demands of both the employees and anyone outside who go to hospital. In 2010, this area was now for people who work for the hospital only to park, and the area for public parking purpose had been built on the east of the hospital connecting directly to the ring road.
- This is the best tie to live due to the development of technology in communication and health To what extent do you agree with this statement 90
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 75
- Some people believe that society is becoming less friendly these days. W¬¬hy do you think this might be? Suggest some ways in which this can be reversed. 84
- People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons for this, and how can people learn more about the natural world? 84
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63265306122 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62187319972 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8681943278 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.714285714 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327660086747 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17584689742 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800343184768 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204110643686 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918879239406 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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