It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, more and more people are investing their time, money and efforts in taking care of their offspring. This is for the benefits for future generation, there for I strongly support the idea that parents should take courses about raising children, especially when they are at very early ages.
At first, not everyone who has just had or is going to have a child knows necessary things about what they are going to deal with. Infants are often new with their own parents, very sensitive with the surroundings and have special features which we do not often see in people around us every day. Therefore, every mother and father need to know what a baby normally behave, why he or she could cry, what food they can eat or how to keep warm for a child. In addition to that, many skills are also important for parents to gain if they want to raise their offspring successfully, such as calming a child when he cry, making him smile, trying not to get angry, playing toys together and even teaching basic language skills. For parents, especially those who have children for the first time, all lessons about this are crucial for them to nurture a child and can be found only in parenting classes where they can learn from professionals who have had decades of experience in working and guiding how to work with children.
Another reason for taking parenting courses is the long-term benefits the future generations. Research has shown that the care for children at early stage is vital for their development compared to what they could receive at any other ages. The children who have first five years in the condition with their parents’ suitable care are often healthier, both mentally and physically, than their counterparts. Additionally, children could also learn languages and many other skills better and faster later in their life if they were taught basic words and sentences in family environment when they were just able to speak. For example, it has been recorded in China that many citizens achieved high academic success thanks to the fact that they had been taught basic Chinese and English when they were just over 10 months old. Thus, it would be a huge mistake if parents do not pay attention on their offspring at first few years of their life, and taking professional training of raising a child is certainly necessary if they want their future generations to be better.
In conclusion, anyone who has duty of nurturing a child should take specialized courses about raising children to have suitable knowledge and abilities for the task in order to benefit their offspring in many years later in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cries'.
Suggestion: cries
...sfully, such as calming a child when he cry, making him smile, trying not to get an...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85398230088 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46831277151 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515486725664 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4775555926 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.714285714 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247701513884 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100726594067 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603359143192 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170371594223 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469513279391 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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